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Consider using these shorter, simpler alternatives to bureaucratic, overstated and pompous words. Note that several
simple words may be clearer than a single long word. Sorry about the green background in the table! Something went wrong in the HTML
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access (as a verb)
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get, reach |
accommodate
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fit, hold, adapt, house, adjust, help, grant, allow |
accommodation, accommodations
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home, house, room, homes, houses, rooms |
accompany, accompanying
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go with, escort, with, attend, belong to |
accomplish
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do, achieve, perform, succeed, carry out |
accordingly
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so |
acquire
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get, buy, win, gain, earn, pick up |
additionally |
and, also |
(an) additional
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more, added, other, extra, another |
adequate (number of)
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enough, satisfactory, acceptable |
adjust, adjustment |
change |
advise
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tell, recommend |
afford
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give |
alter, alteration |
change |
alternative
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other |
ameliorate
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make better, improve |
analogous
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similar |
anticipate
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expect |
append
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attach, add |
apprise
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tell, advise |
appropriate (as an adjective)
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proper, right, fitting, suitable, apt, correct |
(for) approximately
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about, roughly, almost, around, close to, nearly, or so |
ascertain
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check, be sure, find out, discover, learn |
assist; assistance
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help, aid, back, relieve; help, aid, backing, support, relief |
attain
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reach, succeed, meet, gain, get, win, arrive at, grasp |
attempt (as a verb)
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try, take on |
attired
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dressed, dressed, clothed |
augment
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increase, make larger |
basically
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Delete or use mainly, most, mostly, chiefly, largely |
biannually
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twice a year |
bimonthly , biweekly
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every two months, every other month; every two weeks, every other week |
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category
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group |
cease
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end, stop, finish |
cognizant |
aware, knowing |
commence
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begin, start, open |
commencement |
beginning, start |
communicate |
write, talk |
compensation
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pay, payment |
complete
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finish |
component, components
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part, parts, ingredient, item, unit |
comprise
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consist of, contain |
conceal
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hide, cloak, cover, disguise, mask, shelter, veil |
concept
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idea |
concerning
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about, on, for, as for, in, of, over, to, toward, with |
consequence |
result, effect, outcome, importance, note, weight |
consequently
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so, thus |
consolidate
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combine, join |
constitute
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make up, be, compose, form, set up, frame |
construct
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build, make, erect, set up, compose, form, frame, model |
container |
bottle, jar, package |
cooperate
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help |
currently
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now, today, (just) yet or delete |
customary
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usual, ordinary, normal, routine, regular |
deem
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consider, think, treat as, believe, judge, view |
delete
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cut, drop |
demise |
death |
demonstrate
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show, prove, display, explain, teach, march |
denote
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show, say, mark, note, mean, stand for |
depart
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leave, go |
designate
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appoint, set, name, label, choose, earmark, show |
desire
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need, want, wish |
desist
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stop, suspend, end, give up |
detain
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hold |
determine
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figure out, learn, find out, fit, decide, settle, end, control, fix, discover |
diminutive |
small, tiny, little |
disseminate
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send out, spread, scatter |
donate
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give, grant, present |
duplicate (as a verb) |
copy, double, repeal, multiply |
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effectuate
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carry out, bring about, achieve, realize, cause |
e.g. (exempli gratia)
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for example |
eliminate
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cut, drop, end, get rid of, remove, erase, expel, cancel, cut out |
employ (an instrument or tool)
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use |
encounter (as a verb)
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meet, run into, face |
endeavor (as a verb)
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try, carry out |
enumerate
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list, name, count, number |
et al. (et alibi, et alii)
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and others, and elsewhere |
etc. (et cetera)
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and others, and the like, and the rest |
evince |
show, reveal |
expedite
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hasten, speed up, hurry |
expend |
spend, use, pay |
expenditure
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expense, cost, spending, outlay, charge, payment |
expiration |
end, close, finish, death |
facilitate
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help, ease, make easy, make easier, simplify, promote |
facility
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base, building, factory, laboratory, office, plant, warehouse (be specific or omit) |
factor
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part, fact, feature, condition, circumstances, reason, cause (be specific or omit) |
feasible
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possible, probable, likely |
feedback
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comments, response, opinions |
finalize
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finish, end, complete, settle, wrap up |
following (as a preposition)
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after |
formulate
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devise, develop, form, make, work out, draw up, draft, frame, create, express, plan |
forward (as a verb) |
send |
fundamental
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basic |
furnish |
give, send, provide, supply, equip |
hence |
so, from now, from here |
henceforth
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from now on, from now |
hereafter; herein, herewith; heretofore
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from now on or later for hereafter; here is (are), with this or in this for
herein and herewith; up to now, earlier, before or until now for heretofore |
hosted
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gave, is host to, entertained |
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i.e. (id est)
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that is |
impact (as a verb)
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affect, influence |
implement
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carry out, achieve, do, follow, fulfill, make, produce, put in place, put into use, realize, set, set up,
complete, impose (as a verb); tool, instrument (as a noun) |
inception
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beginning, start, birth |
incombustible |
fireproof |
indicate
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say, show, suggest, feel, hint, mention, point at, tell, mark, signal, point out, point to,
read |
indication
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sign, signal, mark, hint, suggestion |
individual, individuals
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person, people, man, men, woman, women, anyone, everyone, someone |
inform
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tell |
initiate
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begin, introduce, open, start, cause, launch, set up, introduce, admit |
input, output, throughput
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information; input: advice, clout, comments, effort, ideas, opinions, thoughts, views;
output: work, product, byproduct, result; throughput: material |
inquire (about)
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ask |
institute (as a verb)
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begin, start, set up, introduce, create, found |
interface
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interact, meet, collaborate, work together, link,contact |
locality, location
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area, city, district, locale, place, point, site, spot, town, zone, neighborhood |
magnitude
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size, extent, importance, greatness |
manner
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way |
materialize
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appear, develop, happen, occur, turn up, come about |
maximum
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most, largest, greatest |
methodology
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methods, principles, procedure |
minuscule
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tiny |
mitigate
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moderate, ease, soften, relieve, reduce |
modify, modifications
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change, vary, adapt, adjust; changes, variations, adjustments |
monies, moneys
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funds, money, cash |
moreover
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besides, also |
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necessitate
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require, demand, exact, must, need, force, compel, make, call, call for |
necessity |
need |
nevertheless
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anyhow, but, even so, however, still, yet |
notification |
notice, warning, advice, announcement |
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despite, although, even if, however |
numerous
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many, countless, endless, several, untold (or be more specific) |
objective
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aim, goal |
obligated
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bound, compelled |
obligation
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debt, duty, bond, contract, tie, favor |
observe |
see, watch, note, view, follow, keep, obey, remark |
obtain
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get, earn, gain, buy, exist, hold, stand |
obviate |
avoid |
ongoing
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continuing, under way, active, constant, advancing, current, growing, endless, lasting |
operate |
use, work, run, perform, act, go, handle, manage, cause, keep |
operational
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active, live, running, working |
optimal, optimum
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best, ideal, model, greatest, most, peak |
orientate
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orient |
overall
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total, complete, general |
paradigm
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pattern, example, model |
parameter
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limit, boundary, guideline, extent, perimeter--or properties, conditions, characteristics,
feature |
permit
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let, allow |
peruse
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read with care, review, study, examine, inspect |
place (as a verb)
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put |
portion
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part |
possess
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have, own, control, hold, take, take over |
possibility
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chance |
preplan, preplanning
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plan, planning |
present (as a verb)
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give, introduce, show |
presently
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in a little while, in a short time, shortly, soon |
preserve
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keep |
preventative
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preventive |
previous
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earlier |
previously |
before, earlier |
principal
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main, chief |
prior
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earlier |
prioritize
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arrange, list, order, rank, rate, set priorities |
proceed
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go, go ahead, continue, go on, move, run, walk, advance |
procure
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get, buy, gain, win, find |
provide (with)
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give |
purchase (as a verb)
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buy |
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receive
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accept, get |
regard, regarding
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about, on, for, as for, in, of, over, to, toward, with |
relate (to)
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say, show, tell |
remain
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stay |
remainder
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rest, remains, excess, surplus, balance |
remove
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take away, haul away |
remunerate
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pay |
render
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make, give, deliver, hand over, present, send in, pay, show |
reoccur
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recur |
represents |
is |
reproduce
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copy |
request (as a verb)
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ask, seek, question |
reside
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live, stay, remain |
residences
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homes, houses, addresses |
retain
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keep, hold, save |
secure
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get |
select |
choose, pick |
semiannually
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twice a year |
shall
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will, must |
solely |
only |
state
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say |
strategize |
plan |
subsequently
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later, afterward, then, after, next, since |
subsequent (to)
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later, after, afterward, next, since, then, following, resulting |
substantiate |
back up, confirm, prove, support, verify |
summon
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send for, call, call up, call on |
supplement
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add to |
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terminate
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end, stop, cancel, finish, fire, halt, close, wind up, limit |
therefore
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so, then, thus |
thus
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so
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transmit
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send, broadcast, relay, transfer, pass on, bear, carry |
transpire
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happen, occur, take place, leak out |
ultimate
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last, final, crowning, perfect, supreme, eventual |
upon
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on |
utilize
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use |
use up
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use |
virtually
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almost |
vis-a-vis
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about, compared with, opposite |
whether
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if |
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